Editing the Film Plan

• I added in a shot of Sonny and Joseph exploring the "den", this gives the audience more insight into what it is like
• I added Owen looking at Kate, then Kate laughing at friends, this shows the love attraction from Owen to Kate
• I added a cut to Owen driving, showing more reminiscing of memories
• I added a CU shot of Carl drinking a pint, showing that they are teenagers
• I added an Alwnick Castle location shot, denoting a POV shot from Owen meeting Kate
• I changed the ending so that the camera tracks backwards at the end, and does not remains still. This shows more of the location and makes the castle more visible.